Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Introduction

The article I found online is about a couple and their Chihuahua. Their dog ran out of their house and was mauled by a larger dog. The couple called 911 to locate the nearest vet hospital. They found a hospital nearby which offered 24-hour on call care, so they headed there. When they arrived the hospital was empty so they called the number they saw on the door. There was no answer. They raced to the nearest human hospital where someone called the vet hospital and got an answer. The couple was informed that the vet was 30 minutes away and was only on call for existing clients. After the couple offered to pay triple the veterinary bill, which was refused, they began traveling to another vet hospital which was another hour away. Despite their best efforts to receive help for their Chihuahua, the couple’s dog died en route to the pet hospital.
                This article shares just one of the many ways a veterinarian can appear to be unfair or unethical to their career. A veterinarian faces many hardships when it comes to the treatment of a client’s pet. A client who is refused treatment may feel it is because of lack of money, while the vet feels that the procedure would be too costly out of their pocket. My point here is: why should the vet pay for the bill that the pet owner cannot pay? If a client cannot afford a bill, they seem to expect the veterinarian to pay it for them. What the client does not know is that the vet would then have to pay the bill out of their own pocket for an animal that isn’t theirs. What the vet doesn’t know is that the client doesn’t realize that the vet will have to pay from their own pocket. This all results from lack of communication and misunderstandings between client and vet.

5 comments:

  1. It seems to me that your views are kind of different in the two paragraphs. I was going to believe that you were going to bash veterinarians for being such ruthless, heartless people only in it for the money, but then you sort-of defended them in a way. It just seems a little conflicting to me.
    That is a very sad chihuahua story though...

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  2. Sorry Amanda, you can't start with "The article I found online..." and expect me to finish reading this... :) kidding
    1. don't think chihuahua needs to be capitalized.
    2. very touching story, I about teared up at the end..
    3. last couple sentences are a little wordy and confusing, probably should restructure second paragraph to flow better.

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  3. You should def fix the way you start this. I was like i don't want to read this, but for reals you should fix that, but your second paragraph seems to be to the point.

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  4. I agree with Katelyn about how you start paragraph 1; in addition, the paragraph could be made more fluid by combining some sentences. The real issue is wiht your second paragraph. At this point I should have a clearer idea of what your issue and how you are going to develop it. I'm still not sure what the issue is. Is your issue the amount of out of pocket expense a vet has to pay for what clients don't pay for? I've never known a vet to not demand payment in full before procedure, so I just don't get your point. Can you explain i9t more clearly?

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  5. Good story, but a bit disorganized it seems. What is the point of this paper? Maybe narrow down what you are going to be discussing and reword the first sentence. Interesting topic!

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